During critique, Taylor was kind enough to take notes* on what I should fix and comments made while I was presenting. Also, when I got some of my icons turned back in, Jamie had made some notes* as well. Here are the comments that they made:
Notes from Jamie (above)
Close up of Jamie's notes (above)
*Yes, I thought scanning them would be easier. Yes, scanning them was a good idea. A bunch of text in a post just isn't fun. This is graphic design, let's be visual!).