Iron [Fe] Layouts and Spreads

In Typography we are working out with designing layout spreads. We were told to revise five layouts. Here are how mine came out:

Then, I picked out three of my favorites I wanted to work on and to show Michael. This is what happens with Michael has a red Sharpie in his hand and wants you to make revisions (FAIL!) Haha:

Here are my final three layout revisions that I transfered from Illustrator to InDesign: